This may be just my realistic side talking, but the breasts are off. Breasts that small, unless in a seriously tight bra, which doesnt appear to be there beause of the style of dress, shouldnt overlap, or even touch each other in the center. And just in case its just the angle, they're also kind of the wrong shape Hey you asked for advanced critique, babeh. Other than that, she's slightly off balance and not obeying the laws of gravity very well, especially the fabric, which is also not folding properly at her elbow. There should be more gathering of the fabric at the crook of the elbow so it doesnt look like it glued to her.

<.<;; *runs away*

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O_o hmmmmm I can explain some of the stuff


I'll um fix the boobs...... for some reason it never registered as looking wrong.
The sleeves I'll work on. Thanks for the tip on that.
^___^ as for her position she is leaning against that dragon.

^_^ I guess it's hard to tell in the sketch but there will be some rock like ledging she'll be on if and when I get around to coloring it. haha

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ohhhhh yeah i couldnt tell that she was against the dragon. in that case, dont mind the postition comment ish verrrry pretty x33

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I like this work, she is pretty and the dragon is really cool! This is a great picture
The details are really good, like the decoration of her dress

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